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Experiment 1

the photo essay

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emily

2/22/19
“The fact that I’m a middle child has played a lot of roles in the way I am, and my relationship with my siblings I think is unique and special to me. I have two siblings with super strong personalities, and I think it’s made me into who I am as a person. One, being that my siblings are such big athletes and so dedicated and motivated in sports, that has motivated me to put forward that same effort into other things that I’m interested in such as my school work and volunteering — mainly my academics because that’s kind of my strength versus how theirs are on the soccer field or what not. I have always been in the middle of two very strong personalities, so in that dynamic, I’m always the rational one. I’ve learned how to deal with a lot of different opinions, which I think I have been able to apply elsewhere too.”
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evelyn

2/27/19

“With job applications and positions on student orgs and summer work and everything like that, it’s hard not to feel kind of garbage about yourself if you don’t get a position, so having my best friend just be my number one hype man and just looking out for me and reminding me to keep working and that I do good work and I’m valuable and having that voice in a person my age has just been really helpful for me. I’m always grateful for my mom because she does the same thing, but I think it’s really different when it comes from someone your own age because they know what the environment that you’re living in is like.”
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andrew

2/27/19

“In reflecting recently, I’ve realized that in the past I’ve not felt like I had a good, set group of friends who I’m very close with. I’ve always had many friends but not a very tight group. But I’ve found that this group of six guys that I’ve been living with for the past four months have been so kind, and they have really made me a better person. I actually wasn’t going to originally live with them. I didn’t know until May of this past spring where I was going to live. Plans had fallen through, but I ran into a guy that I worked with over the summer at a camp, and he mentioned that they were looking for an extra roommate, so I was like okay, let me know if you need someone else. Eventually I got in and was living with those guys, and I could not be more grateful ‘cause as I said they make me a better person. They push me to do so many better things than what I was doing with my life before.”

Proposal

            This experiment will take the loose format of photo essay blog, consisting of images of various people or things that they are grateful for. The subjects of these features will consist of students from Michigan to show the variety of what people who may be from the same age group and same university hold most dear. Along with each picture in the photo collection, I will include a blurb or paragraph with a quote about something that they are particularly thankful for or a story about gratefulness that they would like to highlight. I will also include the date on which I spoke with that specific person to document that these answers are specific to that point in time for that person, as most of the things we are grateful for tend to shift through time.

            Using photos specifically would bring this experiment to life for everyone who chooses to view it, as it is another level of engagement with the person who is sharing these details of their life even more. I believe it would also inspire other people who were to explore the photo essay to ponder gratitude in their own lives and what they are thankful for. The strength of this experiment, and subject matter in general, is that an ideal audience is anyone. Any person can get something out of taking a look inward and reflecting on what small details of their life make it better, especially those that sometimes go unnoticed. I hope to share this with an audience that will then translate that into their own personal reflection of gratitude, making this experiment relevant for anyone who is interested.

Genre Analysis & Research

            The general conventions of a photo essay include a series of pictures that are related either through a narrative or theme. Other than that, the genre is fairly flexible. Words can be included if they add something to the series, and the length of the photo essay can vary based on the author’s preferences.

            One successful model of the genre I am choosing to pursue is the Humans of New York blog, which takes pictures of people on the streets of New York City and asks them specific questions or to tell a meaningful story about their life. Their words are then placed to accompany a picture of either their face or, if they choose not to have their face in it, another detail of them that stands out or makes them unique. Humans of New York is unique in that it lets people tell their own stories and records them exactly how they are told. Also, each subject of the blog has a very engaging story to tell, which I believe everyone does, but they are asked questions in a certain way where that story can come out.

            Another model of a similar format is The Dogist blog, which is a collection of pictures of dogs from all over the world, often categorized into groups of photos under one title connected by a theme. Like HONY, there is usually a quote attached to the image, although not always. The dog’s name, age and hometown are included with the image.

            To deepen my ability to engage with this genre, I looked into the best way to approach strangers in asking to photograph them and have them be a part of my project. In an interview, Brandon Stanton, the creator of Humans of New York, explains that the only way to get better at making these approaches is to do them over and over again. People do not respond well to strangers asking to take a picture of them if the person approaching them seems threatening or nervous.

            In terms of my subject matter, gratitude was something that was not widely talked about or publicized until fairly recently when there was a surge of interest in positive psychology. Now there are a lot of recent articles that have some out in the past few years such as “50 Ways to Show Gratitude for the People in Your Life” and “13 Most Popular Gratitude Exercises & Activities.” Easy ways to buy into the trendy idea of gratitude are very much mainstream, but there is not much of a discussion about what it is in specific that people are grateful for. My experiment would work to expand on this conversation of gratitude and make it more meaningful than just a lifestyle trend.
            There are also a number of scientific studies that have been conducted demonstrating a correlation between gratitude and happiness. A 2003 study by Watkins, Woodward, Stone & Kolts demonstrated a positive relationship between gratitude as measured by the Gratitude Resentment and Appreciation Test (GRAT) and subjective well-being. There are multiple other studies focusing on this relationship with similar results. With this research in mind, maybe this experiment will improve the happiness both of those who participate in the interview process and those who read the responses. By showing real people talking about real things in their life that they are grateful for, hopefully this would encourage people to actually thing about integrating this into their life on a long term and personal way.

Sketch

            The project will include a series of twelve photographs, so twelve different stories of what people are grateful for. These pictures will vary based on the person I am interacting with and what they would like to have photographed. Some people may be comfortable with my photographing their face, others may prefer to have a thing or object of theirs photographed.

I would like to approach some people who are my friends at first, so that I can figure out the best way to ask people about this subject matter. As I grow more comfortable with how to approach the questions, I would like to talk to people I do not know and run into in various locations on campus.

            When approaching someone, I will tell them what the goal of my project is and then begin having a basic conversation with them to find out what the best way I can get them to talk about something that they are personally grateful for is. That could be just asking them, “what are you grateful for?” or it could entail something more specific, based on the information I can get from them in our previous conversation. Often times, the point will not just be for the subject to name something he or she is grateful for, but to go through a process of reflection that enables them to truly appreciate the small improvements in quality of life these people or things in their life can make.

            After I have the quotes and the photographs, I will put them on a webpage. The photos will be displayed in the order I took them in. The stories I have gathered from each person will be displayed next to their picture, with the most powerful statements they make being displaying in a larger font size. The date that I took the image will come up along with the quote about what that particular subject is grateful for. I would ideally like to have the option for these stories to be shared via social media, so they can reach a wider audience.

Reflection

            In going through the motions of the creation of this experiment, I learned a lot about how I would have to refine the process. Firstly, I need to consider how to gather responses from a well-balanced variety of people who would each have different and equally compelling answers. I would need to find good locations to approach these people where I can firstly approach them in a way in which they would be willing to participate in the project, but also where I could take a good photograph of them. I would also need to improve the way in which I ask people about what it is they are grateful for, so they can open up easily and give me a meaningful answer. I think that the idea of explaining my background with gratitude before asking people to participate in this project would give them a good insight into the types of answers they could potentially give as well as make them feel more comfortable with me on some level.

            I found that I really enjoyed hearing the responses of people once they got to talking about something that they were very passionate about. I could tell when this would happen because they would start to find the words to describe their gratitude much more easily than in the beginning of our conversation when things were a little repetitive and mundane. I liked also how the change in font sized worked in presenting the quotes because it broke up the long paragraphs a little bit and highlighted what I believed to be the main points, which allowed me to show my own personal voice in other people’s words. I do think I should try to cut out more of the repetitive parts of the quotes, while still trying to keep them direct and authentic, as to focus the reader on the message being provided rather than having them get caught up in the rambling of the spoken words of the participants. I do feel that this experiment inspired me to reflect even more on the people I am grateful for in my life, so I hope that if continued it will do the same from anyone else who is exposed to it.

Works Cited

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Watkins, et al. “GRATITUDE AND HAPPINESS: DEVELOPMENT OF A MEASURE OF GRATITUDE, AND RELATIONSHIPS WITH SUBJECTIVE WELL-BEING.” Latest TOC RSS, Scientific Journal Publishers, 1 Jan. 1970, www.ingentaconnect.com/content/sbp/sbp/2003/00000031/00000005/art00001.

 

“Humans of New York.” Humans of New York, www.humansofnewyork.com/.

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Dublin, UCD - University College. “On How I Approach Strangers in the Street | Humans of New York Creator Brandon Stanton | UCD, Dublin.” YouTube, YouTube, 24 Apr. 2014, www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPxzlGPrM3A.

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